letter for Mr. Pastore

Dear Mr.Pastore,
I have done all six blog entries and have inputted them on my blogger site. I have also written the rough copies in my notebook. As grade I think I should earn an A- or A because I worked hard all the lessons. I did all my work on time. As proofreading I think I have done a pretty good job and my grammar was most of the time correct. I have already completed all the comments in a constructive way. The the amount of the words in the blog entries is correct, and the titles are also as you asked us to write them. My work has improved a lot from the last quarter. I would like to earn a grade, for which I fought a lot for.
Sincerely Your student France Viler P.S. = On Thursday I won't be at School

SYNOPSIS 8: BLACK BEAUTY
The protagonist of this book is a horse: Black Beauty. Black Beauty had a wonderful life as a colt. He was “loved” from everybody in the farm he lived and had lot's of friends. All the horses were cleaned perfectly and so was Black Beauty. To clean him there was Jack, a young boy that worked in the farm. Then, unfortunately the factory was closed and Black Beauty was sold as all the other horses. Black Beauty passed about 5 years of hell. He passed about five years with owners that were really terrible in all means, and for this reason he suffered a lot. Then he was sold to a family that cured him enough and were kind with him but after a certain period of time they had to sell him because they didn't have enough money. As he is brought to the horse shop Black Beauty sees Jack and starts doing many strange things to be noticed by him. Jack right away remembered himself of Black Beauty and decides to buy him. Jack then brings him in a farm where finally Black Beauty will be able to live the rest of his life in a wonderful way.